The two pie charts provide the information about the increase and decrease of the world population in a century.

• The two pie charts provide

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information about the increase and decrease

of

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the world

population

in a century. •

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, it can be said that the two pie charts suggest, in some

countries

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the

population

has increased significantly, but in some countries, we can see that the indicators have

fall

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slightly during the period. • In 1990, in Asia Pacific

population

has

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decreased from three

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fifth to 54 per cent within a century. In

this

year the

population

of Europe accounted for a quarter and after a hundred years. It

fall

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dramatically by slightly more than one in ten.

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, the rate of others and North America remained the same, they make up 3 per cent and 5

percent

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, respectively. • The

population

rate of Africa comprised 4

percent

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and after

a

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ten decades,

this

indicator rose by 6

percent

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. In Latin America and

Caribbean

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,

number

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of

population

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constituted 3 per cent and

after

this

period, it increased by 5

percent

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within ten decades.