10. Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to a friend to tell him that you cannot go to theatre. In your letter Apologize, Explain the situation, Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket.

Dear Sam, I hope you are doing absolutely fantastic. I was delighted to know

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you bought movie tickets for both of us. Unfortunately, I would not be able to join on 22

Janaury

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January

. I am really sorry that I cannot make it. Please forgive me, I don't want to spoil your movie interest. As you know, my grandfather

having

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some

health related

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health-related

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issues. He's having

specialist

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appointment on that day. It's really important for me to go

along with

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him.

Also

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, some close relatives are coming to my home to see him. I have an idea for

extra

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ticket. Ram really loves

movies

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movies,

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maybe you can contact him to join you. If he's not

available

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available,

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then

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my cousin Sin will

definately

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definitely

go with you. I hope you will enjoy the movie and make wonderful memories together. But, don't worry

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, we

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will meet each other soon. I

am apologizing

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apologise to

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you from my heart. Yours lovingly, Abc

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Jan 27, 2026

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Polite apology.

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Clear reason for not going.

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Offer of another plan with the extra ticket.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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155 words

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