Some people think that giving aid to poor countries has more negative impacts than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some people that

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poor countries have much more drawbacks than positive sides. I totally disagree with

this

phenomenon and believe it should be the best solution to overcome

for

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decreasing poorness.

To begin

with, the

first

and the most reason why I agree with helping poor communities is that it improves health facilities. Thanks to

this

development, people can solve their health problems.

For example

, according to some studies, governments which are given aid can easily find local solutions

their

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citizens

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issues. The

second

reason

of

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my agreement is that it

progress

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education

opportunities.

In other words

, weak countries that are given aid may build

diffirent

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different

education

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buildings

such

as universities and colleges.

As a result

of

this

development, the level of

education

might

incease

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decrease

.

Therefore

, I believe that it is a more effective practical idea.

Moreover

, another reason why I agree with

this

idea is that it prevents

starving

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.

In other words

, If poor people are taken money, they will spend it for sustaining life.

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, we know that

,

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aid organizations play a key role

for

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the

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Africa. Thanks to

this

help they could their lives.

Hence

, I think that it is a more reasonable way for solving

this

problem. In conclusion, giving help

poor

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to poor

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countries is a good idea and I agree with it because of developing health care systems, progressing

education

, and preventing poorness. If

this

solution is put into practice, it will have better consequences for society.