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You have made a reservation at a hotel for a business trip for you and your colleagues. However, you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: give details of your current booking explain what changes you need to make and why ask the manager to make some special arrangements for your business meetings

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
to
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this
 letter to inform you that some adjustment has to do
in
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 our previous booking.
During
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last
 month I booked you are hotel meeting room for 25pax and held on 12th
january
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. But I have to increase
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 of pax and add
meal
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 basis
also
. Because as per my boss he
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me
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that invite our marketing team as well.
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, we need
extend
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 our covers and add another 25 covers to the previous booking.
Then
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final
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 cover will be 50
insted
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instead
 of 25.
However
, previously I made
reservation
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 for
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1 day, but our meeting will be
conducting
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 for 2 days. Please extend our time
also
.
Moreover
, I would like to suggest you that arrange for
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projector
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 and
big
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 screen
for
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 make our presentation. I would like to hear from you that
possible
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 changes. please
dont
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don't
 hesitate to contact me. Yours Faithfully, Asanka.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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