Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

IT IS TRUE THAT CELLPHONE TECHNOLOGY SPREAD WIDE RANGE IN OUR
SOCIETTY
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SOCIETY
, AND WE
ALSO
GIVE OUR MOST OF
TIME
FOR USING MEANINGLESS WAY OF CELLPHONE. I BELIEVE THAT THE EFFECT OF
THIS
TECHNOLOGY ON THE HUMAN MIND, IS A GOING ON THE WRONG SIDE.
FIRST
OF ALL, EVERY POCKET HAVE ONE SMARTPHONE IN
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CURRENT DAY.
ALSO
, HALF OF
HUMAN
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THE HUMAN
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MIND OR THOUGHTS ARE TAKEN BY
CELLPHONES
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CELL PHONES
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.
MOREOVER
, PUPILS ARE MORE
DEPENDING
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OR SPENDING THEIR LEISURE
TIME
IN
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ON
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PHONE
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THE PHONE
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,WHILE THEY DO NOT
WANT
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DO SOME SPECIAL
ACTIVITES
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ACTIVITIES
OR NOT GIVING PROPER
TIME
FOR
THEM
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THEIR
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HOBBIES OR SKILLS. FOR ILLUSTRATION, BEFORE THE
TECHLONOGY
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TECHNOLOGY
, COMMUNITIES
PREFRE
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PREFERRED
TO MEET IN REAL
LIKE
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LIFE
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FACE TO FACE,
SPENDING
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AND SPENDING
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GOOD
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A GOOD
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TIME
WITH FRIENDS. NOW, THEY WANT TO DO ALL
IN
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SMARTPHONE
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SMARTPHONES
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. LIKE,
ONLINE
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AS ONLINE
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MEETING
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MEETINGS
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,
PLAYING
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AND PLAYING
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ONLINE GAMES.
AS A RESULT
, PEOPLE
GOES
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GO
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TO
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TOO
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FAR AND FAR FROM EACHOTHER AND LOST GOOD RELATIONS WITH
THEM
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THEIR
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FRIENDS
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OR RELATIVES.
FURTHER
STRENGTHENING THE VIEW,
CELLPHONES
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CELL PHONES
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BECOME MORE ATTRACTIVE FOR
MINOR
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MINORS
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AGES THAN ADULTS. ADOLESCENTS HAVE A
LOT
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LEISURE
TIME
IN A SCHOOLTIME.
THUS
, THEY SPEND A LOT OF
TIME
ON
CELLPHONE
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CELLPHONES
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.
FOR INSTANCE
, IN
A
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THE
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LAST
CENTURIES,
CHILDEREN
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CHILDREN
PLAYED MORE
PHYSICALLY
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PHYSICAL
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GAMES OR DO ACTIVITIES AND EXPAND THEIR SKILLS
BY
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THROUGH
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THAT. BUT, EVERY
CHILDREN
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HAVE
MOBILE
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A MOBILE
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PHONE. THEY SPEND MORE
TIME
FOR PLAYING ONLINE GAMES, CHATTING WITH ONLINE FRIENDS, AND USING THE SOCIAL MEDIA APPS. EVEN, THEY SEARCH
SOME
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WRONG , WHICH IS NOT GOOD FOR THEM. AS A CONSEQUENCE, BY DOING ALL ONLINE, THEY CAN NOT FIND THEIR SKILLS OR HOBBIES WHICH ONE IS USEFUL
IN AS
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ADULTS
TIME
. IN CONCLUSION, SMARTPHONE IS USEFUL IN A SOME WAY FOR HUMANKIND. BUT, WE NEED TO HOW TO USEFUL
AND
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IT AND
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WHAT IS THE PRONS AND CRONS OF
THIS
DEVICE WITHOUT IT IS A VERY DANGEROUS GADGET FOR COMMUNITIES.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • screen time
  • digital addiction
  • instant gratification
  • multifunctional
  • connectivity
  • social networking
  • online services
  • self-expression
  • entertainment options
  • instant access
  • educational resources
  • communication tools
  • virtual interactions
  • distracted living
  • technological dependence
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