As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Apart from making

profit

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,

firms

must play an important role in social

responsibilities

. In my opinion, I agree with

this

statement as corporate gain money from

society

,

therefore

it should

also

returned

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back it to

society

.

First

of all,

firms

should not exploit their employees.

This

is because some

businesses

will exploit their workers by forcing them to work long hours that exceed the maximum working hours.

Furthermore

, some

firms

do not pay the minimum wage requirement in order to keep their costs as low as possible.

Additionally

, some

firms

are not providing any insurance care for their employees.

Although

the result may end up

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making huge profits,

however

, the entire process is considered inhumanity.

Therefore

, corporate social responsibility is essential as it protects the legal rights of employees.

Besides

, profits created by companies should give some portion back to

society

.

This

is due to the fact that all the

resources

needed by

firms

come from

society

.

For instance

, if a firm wants to produce a product, they need natural

resources

, capital, and human

resources

.

The

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businesses

pick up the natural

resources

that belong to everyone in the world. The

businesses

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capital mostly are

sponsor

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or charity by

the

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individuals. The ventures

also

need the demand of

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the labor

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labor

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force that provide by the households. If a firm did not have social

responsibilities

, it might be abandoned by

society

.

For example

, ventures that only put attention to making

profit

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but did not care about what

the

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society

needs. Eventually, the firm

make

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end

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up

to close

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the business.

Thus

, it is proven that

businesses

should play a good role in terms of social

responsibilities

. In conclusion, social

responsibilities

should not be neglected by

businesses

, as they are part of the way they give back to the community.

Hence

, the more money a company make, the more the company should give back to the community

such

as doing

the

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charity.