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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #sites #impact #individuals #society
The advancements
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 the field of technology have not only improved the standard of living in the world, but
also
 ignited various tensity globally. A substantial proportion of individuals claim that
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 social networking websites have
a massive cons
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on
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 the natives as well as
community
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. I partially agree with the given statement. To commence with, due to the easy accessibility
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 the internet,
it
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creates numerous problems
such
 as
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 physical body, atrocious mental health and many
kind
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of
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other problems. To exemplify, reports are made by Indian researchers. It is visible that more than half of the population has capable to buy
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a smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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, even
numerous
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 adolescents are using
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a cellphone
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cellphone
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 and using hyperspace. Many online web
pages
 are promoting sexual content and several atrocious commodities, which
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directly affect
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the brain.
As a result
,
internet
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 is trying to ruin toddler's life. Shifting towards the final view, the fact cannot be denied that, every coin has two sides
similarly
pages
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the
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cyberspace have a both negative and positive
side
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.
On the other hand
, youngsters can easily gain
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knowledge as well as learn many new skills. Web
pages
 are providing a private space and good privacy.
Nevertheless
, School students can effortlessly complete their homework. To illustrate it, popular
pages
 are occupied by numerous brands.
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, they are providing
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 internet
tunnel
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. All aforementioned facts and figures lead to the
outcomes
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 that,
it
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has
a
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several pros. To conclude, unquestionably, it has many pros as well. When people use
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on
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 the correct way, they can effectively learn new skills.
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  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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