it is common these days to see celebrities advertising different products. do the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
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modern-day
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the losses.
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products
to the public , which inturn
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in turn
For example
, a cosmetic product which cures acne ,when advertised by a well known
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well-known
effects
and give good reviews to most on the internet.
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