it is common these days to see celebrities advertising different products. do the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In the
modern day
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world, most celebrities are involved in promoting
products
through advertisement. Today we will discuss
about
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how the benefits
outweighs
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the losses.
To begin
with, many sports and film industry models get committed
with
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agencies to give an impression of the
products
to the public , which
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induces them to buy the goods.
For example
, a cosmetic product which cures acne ,when advertised by a
well known
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sports legend or a film actress gets attention immediately. The goods get the status where the people come in direct contact with the positive
effects
and give good reviews to most on the internet.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of cases being reported with more and more side
effects
and harmful
effects
from
such
products
which
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been used and
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opposite
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reaction. Though it does not occur to every single individual, 1 in 5 cases are being reported whilst new beauty
products
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the facial appearance.
Moreover
,there are
also
many other negative impacts on
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society
as a result
of it. People
unable
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to get back to their normal lives until they combat the
effects
of the product which affects them
economicallly
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economically
, socially, physically and psychologically. To conclude , these advertisements are neither proven to have advantages that overweigh the disadvantages since every now and
then
, each and every product
known
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to have both good and bad reviews. Typically, there are many other significant
products
but still, all the
products
must be tested well enough before being given the accreditation to be sold in the society to avoid any unexpected
occurences
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occurrences
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • celebrities
  • advertising
  • products
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • development
  • increased visibility
  • brand awareness
  • credibility
  • trust
  • higher sales
  • wider target audience
  • endorsement
  • costs
  • overexposure
  • authenticity
  • backlash
  • negative impact
  • brand image
  • ineffectiveness
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