Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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smoking has become a very common habit worldwide.
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question is] why should we be concerned about
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and what can we do to stop it? [n
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the effects of smoking and how to solve
this
dilemma. in terms of problems, smoking is a huge hazard to not only humanity but
also
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other living things. The main reason given to support
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claim is that? smoking produces innumerable toxins that not only harm our bodies but
also
our atmosphere. To illustrate, the evident hole in our ozone layer
In other words
, ] we should be concerned about the rising rates of
smokers
because it is giving way to a poor and unhealthy future.
Moreover
, smoking is leading to new diseases every day not just for
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smokers
but mostly for
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non-
smokers
.
Firstly
, our biggest concern should be the veil
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people have thrown on the health warnings caused by smoking.
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, the continued ignorance of
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smokers
is leading to fatal effects on everyone inhaling the toxins.
Secondly
, our focus should be shifting from just being concerned to actually taking action.
This
is because 'concern' is not going to reduce the number of
smokers
or
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themselves find it nearly impossible to give up
this
self-destroying habit,
therefore
, we need to take the initiative to aid them and make it simpler.  In conclusion, it is evident that the population of
smokers
is increasing at a rapid rate and so is their ignorance
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health warnings. The
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industry itself must ensure steps are taken to prevent
this
phenomenon from deteriorating
further
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