In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the current era,
technology
played a huge role in
business
development.Especially in marketing, we have a lot of easy ways to access customers due to
our
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advent of
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. It will help to grow our businesses around the
world
.I agree with
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positive development of
technology
and let
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discuss
about
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the essay.
Firstly
,
past
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decades we don't have
this
much exposure in the
world
but nowadays we have huge
developement
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development
in our
technology
and
its
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useful
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to develop the
business
in
good
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way.most people wanted to reach their
products
to all the people.Usually, we have followed our old style advertisements
such
as newspapers,posters,
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catalogs
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these all are
traditional
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to
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our
products
to the buyer but these all are not help to grow our
business
wider .
for example
, in the village have one cake shop their want to explore their
products
so they will print offer
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and give to customers.
Secondly
,
in
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the
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digital
technology
have a lot of opportunities to advertise
the
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products
to the
world
.It will help to reach all the customers around the globe.Current trends
such
as Facebook,
instagram
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and
twitter
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are the best advertising application for those who
are sell
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their
products
online .
in
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the
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online applications help to grow their
business
without
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investment.
For instance
, one young poor girl started
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business
through
instagram
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and she did more reels and display her
products
.later she received orders around the
world
. Advent
technology
help
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to develop
business
and easy to access people everywhere .
However
, more
fradulent
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fraudulent
activities
also
happend
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happened
happen
in online
business
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businesses
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such
as money
scam
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and fake
products
. To all put
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in to
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the
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nutshell, all
business
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businesses
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need to advertise their
products
to consumers
otherwise
most of them don't know about the
products
.Current
technology
played
major
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role to reach
the
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products
to everyone .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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