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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements ? with the help of technology , students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.

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In today's modern world,
technology
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 way
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 many fields
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 workspace, educational settings and entertainment. Education and academic fields are one of the main fields that benefited from
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technology
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 tools, I highly agree that
students
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 nowadays are more
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 and able to learn faster with the help of
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, because of higher access and reachability to data,
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 having access to lots of different mediums of media that can suit their learning styles and help them learn different types of information faster.
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 has led to discoveries
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, computers, smartphones and tablets that
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one
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of them made accessing to the
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 and storing them easier for
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students
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 by using websites
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 as google, youtube,
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LinkedIn
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informations
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 they need in
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 of seconds while generations ago it was a very
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 you need if not impossible.
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, with the help of laptops and smartphones
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 are more able to write down the
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 they've learned and store them.
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 with the help of many different
softwares
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software
 that exist within different forms of
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students
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 are now able to find a variety of applications designed specifically for faster and easier education, and through
this
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medium
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 they are able to learn a lot faster than
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 from decades ago.
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 an application like
duolingo
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 help not only
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 but most
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the
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people, to learn many different languages with utmost
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usability
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feasibility
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 mentioned above, I believe with certainty that
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 as a new discovery of mankind
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 helps
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 at every level to become more
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 and more
compotent
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competent
 within their field. knowing and learning the usability of different types of
technology
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 nowadays is a
necessitation
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 that most
students
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 must have the qualifications for.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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