It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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children

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insight into

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issues. And if yes, which type of

punishment

should be done to prevent mental and physical injuries to them

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From my perspective,

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in the following paragraphs, all kinds of

punishment

should be

condomned

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condemned

strongly.

Children

as the newest generation of human

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in every society should be accommodated by a wide range of freedom as if no fault could be

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them. In accordance

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my experience, the more

children

get accustomed to liberty, the more they are able to make

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based on their benefits. To be more precise, neither

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people like parents and teachers nor the younger ones have

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clear idea about the truth to lead anyone to behave in

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right way.

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, every community should rely on the primitive nature of human

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all ages to reach the optimum result. Families, educational systems and society have common concerns related to

children’

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future and

behavior

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.

Thus

, they tend to build an ethical structure to limit

children

in order to raise them in a way which is more efficient.

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, preparing a system in which

children

can be taught richly to nurture their own reasoning skills,

for example

,

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been offered by some well-known psychologists who have

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cemented the idea by

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of studies and measures

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conducted since 20 years ago. The main

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of

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idea lies

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the matter that human

being

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should be proud of

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, which is spoilt by any sort of

punishment

. In conclusion, no words can justify any kind of

punishment

either corporal or physical

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. Since many civilized ways to nurture

children

, fortunately, have been invented, taken into account and investigated successfully, in the modern world there is no need

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such

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