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There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet this is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing would population. Give your opinion on this

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Nowadays technology assists us to produce sufficient
foods
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 for the increasing world’s population.
However
, some believe that
GM
 products
is
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 the best solution to stopping famine around the world,
other
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while other
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 are worried about the long-term negative effects that these
foods
 may have. In
this
 essay, I tend to explore both ideas and
then
 I will explain my view about
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. People who are advocators of
GM
foods
 have said that these crops are resistant to pests and
also
 climate
changes
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.
Moreover
, Scientists can modify bad genes which ripen products.
Therefore
,
this
 kind of food can remain fresh for a long time.
In addition
, we can produce more crops in a short time. In that case, not only we will have enough food to feed the growing population, but
also
 we can reduce the cost of producing food.
For instance
, many
GM
 grains don’t need pesticides.
Although
GM
 products may get lots of benefits to our community,
many
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 research illustrates that they might have long-term risks for both
humans
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 lives and our environment.
Thus
,
may
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 scientists believe that there should be done more studies before spreading
GM
 ingredients into the markets. To sum up, As far as I am concerned, the governments should allocate more budgets for laboratory projects to ensure that modified crops are safe for both us and nature.
In addition
, in my point of view, organic
foods
 can be a suitable substitute for
GM
foods
.
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