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The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, has great influence in shaping people's ideas and their minds.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer.

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The mass
media
 has a powerful influence in shaping our lives. We have come to depend on them for information and entertainment, and in doing so we let them affect important aspects of our lives. The undeniable usefulness of the
media
 in almost instantly providing information about events around the world is largely taken for granted. But in our dependence on the
media
, we have allowed them to mould our 1 notions and opinions of events, places, and people. Though few of us probably think about it, our conceptions of, say, our elected officials spring from television images and newspaper stories. Most of us will never meet prime ministers or presidents, but anyone who is regularly exposed to the
media
 will have an opinion of them. When it is time to cast our vote, we will make our decision based on how the
media
 portray the candidates. We are
similarly
 swayed by coverage of wars. The
media
, representing the values of their owners, societies, and 1 government, tend to report wars with a bias; which is the 'good' side and the 'bad' is determined for us by reporters, editors, and commentators, and sure enough the public begins to form opinions that reflect the I coverage they see, hear and read in the major
media
. The
media
 are
also
 influential in the way they facilitate the spread of culture and lifestyle. The so-called 'global youth culture', in which one finds young people around the world displaying a common interest in music, clothing styles, and films, is an example of the
media
's enormous sway in
this
 regard. A popular figure
such
 as Michael Jackson would never be so well known were it not for the
media
's extensive reach into every society on the globe.
Thus
 I would argue that the mass
media
's influence is certainly great. Indeed, with technological advancements
such
 as the Internet bringing even more forms of electronic
media
 to our homes and workplaces, it is likely the
media
's influence will grow even stronger in future times.
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