Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why this is the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, young people are mostly concentrated on their smartphones

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their daily activities. In my view, despite the advantages of the new technologies that arise from mobile phones, there are many downside effects on

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children’s growth. In

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spending much more time on electronic devices and

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explain a number of adverse impacts on children’s education. The daily use of the telephone by younger people in whatever they are doing has many reasons. One of them is the high competition of smartphone makers providing products with advanced technologies at a speedy frequency.

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devices become accessible for all kids at very low prices.

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, the capability of their apparatus has drastically increased over the years,

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fact led to the great attractiveness of the mobile

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, when I was a high school student, the only thing that I could do with my

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was to make a

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write messages.

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, today there are many games and enjoyable activities that can be done. The

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frequency implication of smartphones in everyday activities has a number of drawbacks.

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of spending more time with their family to ensure social cohesion, young student focus on their device,

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might lead to an asocial environment and kids are likely to be selfish. In my community, people gathered in the dining rooms after a working day to discuss with their relatives and gain more education from them but currently, the fact that family meeting is replaced by technology make a family less cohesive. In conclusion, the frequent use of smartphones is a double-edged sword with certain benefits as well as many inconveniences. Even though new technologies should be involved in the kids’ educational background, their

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should be controlled by the parents in order to gain

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maximum profit.