Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important to or too valuable to be Shared freely. Discuss both those views and give your own opinion.

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it is sometimes thought that sharing knowledge and ideas about science, business and education
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beneficial, others believe all information should not be given unobstructed. In my opinion, I consider that
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and businessmen can get progress if they shared details and
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ought to spread knowledge. On the one hand, some
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think that
scientists
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and traders who share details and more info about their
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and
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often get mass
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's engagement and I agree.
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,
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's engagement with their discoveries and
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motivates them to excel in their fields which,
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, produces success and better progress.
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,
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and traders generally apply themselves and work harder when they see the light of success in their
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or new
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, being driven to achieve the best is vital in order to succeed later, when as successful
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or traders must compete against others in the market with their
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or
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, it is often believed that it is better not to share principal information loosely. As
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, we often misuse valuable things that are given freely, and some get jealous of others' success. With the help of valuable info, some notorious can start conspiracy against
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, entrepreneurs or even
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, one of my uncles shared his secrets of accomplishment through the Media and lost his well-positioned business. Another reason why
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should not share lessons freely
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is because it could bring some uninterested students into the class which is definitely not very fruitful. In conclusion, while
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may vary their opinions, I think
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, businessmen or even
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stand a better chance to succeed if they spread knowledge illustrating details about their
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or new
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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