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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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As the world is developing with
technology
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 in every field, today we can see a plethora of individuals' lives have changed and they completely depend on technological
devices
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. The usage of
technology
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 in the home, work, and leisure activities
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 numerous advantages as well as disadvantages. The following essay will elaborate
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 on whether the positives outweigh the negatives of
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technology
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. Commencing, it is true today that humans cannot live without
technology
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 since it has been an addiction.
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, comparing the early years and today, we can see the world is running smoothly, and with the advancement of telecommunications
devices
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, the work is done effectively and efficiently. Considering the
first
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 point, IT has brought faster and easier communication among
people
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. As an example, we can talk to
people
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 from one end of the world to the other with the usage of the internet and modern
devices
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 which makes families closer, business, education, etc much easier than before.
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,
information
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technology
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 has developed new and innovative approaches
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 as online games, business video conferencing tools, stock management systems, and new sales avenues.
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, the domination of IT in
people
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's activities has benefited to a greater extent.
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, there are some demerits of
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technology
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. Some of the
devices
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 can go down or have faults that can stop all business operations. To exemplify, if malware occurs in a bank system the whole process of banking will go down with the reputation and many lives of
people
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 will be in danger since the personal details and money is stored in the bank.
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, it is significant that the human workforce will be reduced and the jobs of
people
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 will be at a risk with the advent of new technologies
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 as robots.
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, if the right procedures are implemented the negatives of IT can be overcome. In conclusion, the benefits of
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technology
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 and the changes that it has done for humans have been impacted positively where the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhances communication
  • video conferencing
  • instant messaging
  • revolutionized
  • automating repetitive tasks
  • increased productivity
  • remote work opportunities
  • work-life balance
  • access to information
  • search engines
  • online databases
  • digital libraries
  • continuous learning
  • innovation
  • data breaches
  • privacy concerns
  • cybersecurity attacks
  • compromised
  • over-reliance
  • decreased physical activity
  • social interaction
  • digital devices
  • obesity
  • social isolation
  • digital records
  • telemedicine
  • diagnostic tools
  • patient outcomes
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