Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful, and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels. What are the main causes of stress in modern life, and could stress be reduced?

Despite having much better conditions than in the past, nowadays
people
are as though deprived of happiness and what’s more these days human being struggle with it as never before.
However
, in many parts of the world, some nations seem to find how to overcome it.
This
essay will look at the reasons for
this
and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of the dilemma is a lot of distractions in everyday life.
That is
to say that everywhere you can face
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a flush screen of adverts, propaganda, news, entertainment etc.
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nation
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have difficulties with harmony,
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lack of silence in their heads. The solution is for
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to practice more meditation and stay silent for at least ten minutes every day. Another question is that many citizens of modern countries want to live like
other folk
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. What I mean by saying
this
is that
people
often watch track other's life on social media and see that someone buy Ferrari or an expensive house on a beautiful beach or another scenario where one
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a promotion or
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a game and etc. In my case
for example
, when I see some
people
who get a high band of IELTS I feel
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bit jealous of it. To tackle
this
problem
we should be more focused on our goal and not be disturbed by any trivial things. A
third
cause of the
problem
is that employees often have too much work to do. The majority of us stay in the office for long hours to finish never finished job. In Kazakhstan,
for example
, many
people
often start their work day at 7 am and finished it at 9 or 10 pm and they get tired and stressed,
moreover
it has a negative effect on their work-life balance. To tackle
this
issue for the government to undertake some regulative legal acts to regulate these situations and arrange fine sanctions for employers. To sum up, we can see how distractions, social media and overworking have a negative effect on society.
This
is a serious
problem
, and unless we can overcome all these causes,
people
get more and more suffer from stress. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the
problem
lies with the government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic pressure
  • Cost of living
  • Financial strain
  • Workload
  • Job insecurity
  • Gig economy
  • Technology
  • Information overload
  • Social isolation
  • Digitally connected
  • Competitive world
  • High expectations
  • Societal expectations
  • Work-life balance
  • Relax and recharge
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