Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful, and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels. What are the main causes of stress in modern life, and could stress be reduced?
Despite having much better conditions than in the past, nowadays
people
are as though deprived of happiness and what’s more these days human being struggle with it as never before. However
, in many parts of the world, some nations seem to find how to overcome it. This
essay will look at the reasons for this
and propose some solutions.
One of the main causes of the dilemma is a lot of distractions in everyday life. That is
to say that everywhere you can face with
a flush screen of adverts, propaganda, news, entertainment etc. Change preposition
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nation
have difficulties with harmony,Fix the agreement mistake
nations
a
lack of silence in their heads. The solution is for Correct word choice
and a
community
to practice more meditation and stay silent for at least ten minutes every day.
Another question is that many citizens of modern countries want to live like Add an article
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a community
other folk
. What I mean by saying Change the wording
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this
is that people
often watch track other's life on social media and see that someone buy Ferrari or an expensive house on a beautiful beach or another scenario where one have
a promotion or Correct subject-verb agreement
has
win
a game and etc. In my case Correct subject-verb agreement
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for example
, when I see some people
who get a high band of IELTS I feel little
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a little
this
problem
we should be more focused on our goal and not be disturbed by any trivial things.
A third
cause of the problem
is that employees often have too much work to do. The majority of us stay in the office for long hours to finish never finished job. In Kazakhstan, for example
, many people
often start their work day at 7 am and finished it at 9 or 10 pm and they get tired and stressed, moreover
it has a negative effect on their work-life balance. To tackle this
issue for the government to undertake some regulative legal acts to regulate these situations and arrange fine sanctions for employers.
To sum up, we can see how distractions, social media and overworking have a negative effect on society. This
is a serious problem
, and unless we can overcome all these causes, people
get more and more suffer from stress. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem
lies with the government.Submitted by saparzhaksylyk0101 on
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