Should the government fund the education and healthcare system? What is your opinion?

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years, the authorities in some

countries

has

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financed the schooling and medical care of their

citizens

.

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, it motivates and

support

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the

citizens

that need them, especially the poor.

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essay will be discussing the reasons

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decision as well as my opinion.

Firstly

, in

countries

like USA and Uk, the government should provide educational

support

,

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helps the young ones to have access to school and partake in various activities in them, that

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in their developmental stage. The

support

is mostly from adolescents to adulthood-where they are now fully grown and can provide for themselves.

Although

, some developing

countries

such

as Nigeria, Togo and South Africa, provide free high school only and

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a scheme for scholarships

but

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they are all done for the betterment of the community and the people.

Furthermore

, the healthcare system has a very important role to play because the services are needed by every individual on earth, from infancy to late adulthood.

Therefore

, more funds should be ventured

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aspects

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because when the

citizens

have to pay less or receive free treatment, they

terms

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to visit the hospital on a regular basis. Some

countries

has

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health insurance, whereby individuals can pay less dan 10-20% for whatever treatment

provided

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. Whereas, other developing

countries

decide to provide free medical care for under

5years

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5 years

and free maternity treatment ,

this

helps to reduce the rate of infant and maternal morbidity and mortality.

Recent

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that

these

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method has reduced the rates from 80% to 30%, which indicates that the scheme has been effective. In conclusion,I think the government should

support

the

citizens

, both in

education

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and medical system by assigning and supervising the authorities in charge of the different

scheme

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for it to be effective.