Nowadays many companies have manufacturing facilities in different countries. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

In many societies,
companies
have
factories
in various
countries
. Most
of
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companies
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companies'
company's
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factories
are located in undeveloped or developing
countries
like the People's Republic of
China
,
Kingdom
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the Kingdom
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of Thailand and India.
It
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is because placing
factories
in
the
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undeveloped or developing
countries
allows them to recruit a labourer easily.
And placing
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Placing
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manufacturing facilities in different
countries
can
make
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help
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companies
to
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reduce
the
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costs.
Therefore
, there are several advantages and disadvantages for
companies
to have
factories
in different
countries
.
First,
for advantages,
companies
may recruit a labourer easily. Most of
developed
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the developed
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country
's citizens
does
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do
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not want to work in
factories
.
That is
why developed
country's
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country
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companies
like
an
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Samsung and Apple are moving their manufacturing facilities to developing
countries
. Samsung have
a
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factories
a factory
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factories
in
the
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Vietnam and India, Apple have
a
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factories
a factory
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factories
in the People's Republic of
China
and
Republic
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the Republic
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of
China
(Taiwan).
Second,
for disadvantages,
companies
may be
challenge
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in
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the lack of quality problem.
Products
produced from different
countries
has
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a lot of problems, like
an
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inferior
goods
.
Products
produced from
country
A might not have
an
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inferior
goods
but
products
made from
country
B can have
an
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inferior
goods
issues.
This
situation occurs
due to
lack
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a lack
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of labourer's technique.
For example
, when Samsung moved
their
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its
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smartphone
produce
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production
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line from
China
to Korea,
inferior
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the inferior
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goods
problem
had
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declined
raplidly
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rapidly
in 2014.
To sum up
, there are several advantages and disadvantages to
companies
have
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having
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manufacturing
factories
in different
countries
. Businesses can find the best way to make
best
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quality
products
and expand widely.
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