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The bar charts below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world

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The bar graph represents the proportion of individuals who are living in cities. The graph depicts the evolution of the population during 100 years of study, taken in 6 different areas of the globe,
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 as Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin
America
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/Caribbean, North
America
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 and Oceania. Overall, it is clearly evidently an increasing tendency in the percentage of inhabitants in the cities, whilst some districts experienced it with a steady or sharp increase.
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, I see that Africa and Asia were the least percentages. Meanwhile, Latin American/Caribbean and North
America
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 had the highest attendance figures in
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 chart between 1950 and 2007. whilst, there have been a lot of local changes in the cities, Projections for 2050 are seeing a slowdown in most regions. Meanwhile, Latin
America
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/Caribbean will rise by 13% and North
America
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 by 11% plus Europe jumped to the
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 place while experiencing a gradual increase by 33% of the population in urban areas
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