Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days many individuals are turning towards unconventional medicine rather than modern one because of cheap and easy availability. I believe that
this
is a negative approach as it could lead to harmful effects on the human body.
Firstly
, these conventional medications cause short-term or symptomatic benefits rather than full cures.
moreover
, extensive research hasn’t been done on
this
mode of medication .
For example
, homoeopathic medicines are very useful for the treatment of arthritis but unfortunately due to limited research and only symptomatic ,
cures
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these haven’t gained much popularity.
Secondly
, there are various harmful ingredients used in
such
medicines which causes
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deleterious effect on vital organs like the liver and kidney which could add
further
burden on the health sector of the nation.
In addition
to
this
, some of the items used to prepare these medication cause hypersensitivity reactions .
for instance
, certain substances used in ayurvedic medicine derange the liver function which may lead to organ failure and death . In conclusion , one should cautiously use
such
items as ayurvedic or homoeopathic remedies . it is better to visit a specialist doctor
initially
for treatment and diagnostic tests so that the disease can be treated in the best possible manner.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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