More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to ve this problem?
These days many wild animal species are at
the
risk of extinction and there are some already on the endangered species list. In Correct article usage
apply
this
essay, I will outline the reasons for reduction
in Add an article
the reduction
a reduction
number
of wild Change the article
a number
the number
animals
and provide solutions to prevent this
problem.
Most
common reason for Add an article
A most
The most
extinction
of animal lives is the destruction of their natural habitat. As the world population is increasing, there is more need for space to live for humans. Add an article
the extinction
This
will result in the clearing of the forests to use the land for residential and other industry developments. So, wild animals
have no place to live, then
they have to move to new
Add an article
a new
the new
environment
, which Fix the agreement mistake
environments
is
sometimes difficult to adapt Unnecessary verb
apply
with
changes like access to food, Change preposition
to
and
leading to Correct word choice
apply
death
of Add an article
the death
animals
. Also
, forest fires due to global warming is
the other reason for animal death. Due to changes in temperature in Change the verb form
are
summer
season, big Add an article
the summer
fire
are observed these days as compared to Fix the agreement mistake
fires
past
which ultimately Correct article usage
the past
causing
the destruction of Wrong verb form
caused
animals
natural homes and Change noun form
animals'
animal's
leading
to their death.
There are many things that can be done to prevent Wrong verb form
led
the
endangered animal extinction. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, Government should take strict action like imposing big penalties who are causing harm to these animals
and their land. Forest land areas should be reserved for the
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apply
animals
and no human activity should be allowed to
these areas. Placing big fines on breaking rules will hinder human interference in these Change preposition
in
animals
lives. Change noun form
animals'
Other
possible solution to Change the wording
Another
this
problem is to invest money in the reservation
of endangered species and hunting should be completely banned on these Correct your spelling
preservation
animals
.
In conclusion, wild life
is precious for our Correct your spelling
wildlife
ecosysytem
, it can be preserved with both individual level and Government level efforts.Correct your spelling
ecosystem
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