More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to ve this problem?

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These days many wild animal species are at
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risk of extinction and there are some already on the endangered species list. In
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the reduction
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of wild
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and provide solutions to prevent
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problem.
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common reason for
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the extinction
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of animal lives is the destruction of their natural habitat. As the world population is increasing, there is more need for space to live for humans.
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will result in the clearing of the forests to use the land for residential and other industry developments. So, wild
animals
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have no place to live,
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they have to move to
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environment
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changes like access to food,
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leading to
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the death
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of
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, forest fires due to global warming
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the other reason for animal death. Due to changes in temperature in
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season, big
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are observed these days as compared to
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which ultimately
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the destruction of
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animals
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natural homes and
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to their death. There are many things that can be done to prevent
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endangered animal extinction.
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, Government should take strict action like imposing big penalties who are causing harm to these
animals
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and their land. Forest land areas should be reserved for
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animals
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and no human activity should be allowed
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these areas. Placing big fines on breaking rules will hinder human interference in these
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animals
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lives.
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possible solution to
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problem is to invest money in the
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preservation
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of endangered species and hunting should be completely banned on these
animals
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. In conclusion,
wild life
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wildlife
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is precious for our
ecosysytem
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ecosystem
, it can be preserved with both individual level and Government level efforts.
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