Nowadays many companies have manufacturing facilities in different countries. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Currently,many companies are spreading their production facilities globally.In view of some,

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is a negative development considering the

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being produced.

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,I believe the advantages of increasing the employment rate and improving the national

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greatly outweigh the disadvantages.

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with,manufacturing plants mean a requirement of a workforce,which in turn leads to new job openings.Unemployment is a major issue faced by most developing countries around the world,resulting in poverty.

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problem can be reduced significantly by creating more jobs and

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leading locals towards a better lifestyle.

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,the establishment of only one factory unit in Karachi resulted in the employment of about seven hundred people.

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, establishing manufacturing units are a great source of dealing with unemployment and

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poverty.

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, the national

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is improved with more production units in the country.With the lack of

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plants,things have to be imported which causes additional strain on the state's financial resources.To illustrate,the inflation rates of motorbikes were reduced by over 5% with the set up of a Honda industry unit in Pakistan within a month.

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,setting up

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facilities saves the burden on the national

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improves it. Oppositely,

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industry is a major cause of

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in the environment.Obviously,factories give off chemicals and hazardous materials as waste products.If left untreated

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they can cause major health hazards like typhoid,cholera,and many other communicable diseases spread through polluted water.According to a survey of Karachi,the biggest city in the world,approximately sixty per cent of the

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is caused by industrial waste.

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,industries are major

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and

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a health hazard to society. To summarise,industries cause hazards to the environment.

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,if the

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issue is dealt with

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strategy following international policies and guidelines

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the factors of higher employment rates and a strengthened

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are much greater.