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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays some people strangely believe that educating foreign
language
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 is very useful in mush more contexts and majors which overshadowed these issues. But everyone thinks, teaching and learning a foreign expression just is justifiable and useful for travelling to another country. In the following ,essay we discuss both views.
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 of all, learning
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language
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a language
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 isn’t descriptive by limited advantages.
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, the tourism industry depends on
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 issue and developing education in foreign languages is very helpful for any citizens who live in a country with tourist attractions. On another hand
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some country that has
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 development and they need to consider their mother tongue ,in order to have a cultural activity to survive their
language
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 more than learning about another culture.
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 of all, someone thinks the development of learning a foreign
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 is just considered to travel to foreign destinations and
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 very useful for existing better communication between them. In conclusion, in my opinion in the
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 modern ,era we need to learn the necessary
language
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 for raising our communication between humankind. For ,example the English
language
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 has strong efficiency that you could take best relations whit other humans who live around the world.
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 I definitely believe for an increasing number of tourists and attractions too, some
citizen
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 would be
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 a foreign
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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