It is widely believed that consumerism is vital for the economic well-being of a country. However others feel that consumerism has unacceptable social consequences on a society. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Provide examples and supporting evidence to back up your opinion on this subject.
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impact on the community, while others think that Correct article usage
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main factor in the Correct your spelling
the
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. I personally agree with this
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producing
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a few
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consumers
support unethical brands where they
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customer's
government
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On the other hand
, others believe that consumers
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consumer
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improves
economy
. If citizens spend their income buying it can drive the economy
and lead to increase production of goods. The shopper
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shopper's
behavior
can decide what companies should do. Change the spelling
behaviour
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consumers
only want to buy good products.
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a good
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products
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- although
- even though
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