You recently attended a course in another country but had to leave the course to return to your country. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter, you should, >Tell him/ why you had to leave >Explain to him/her what you liked about the lecture. >Thank him/her

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am travelling back to my Country having to leave the course midway.

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unexpected situation has come up since my visa extension did not happen. I had applied for extending my stay here for three more months;

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, it is unfortunate that it didn’t happen.

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I tried meeting you, the time clashed with my airport check-in time and I ended up writing. The lecture was intense and immensely informative. The way you conducted interactive sessions and unveiled the clear picture was astounding. The course actually made me achieve

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tangible qualities that I was not able to imbibe

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my stint in university. I was earnestly hankering to complete the course and take up research under your guidance. Probably, it would have been the best experience I would have ever asked for. Gaining knowledge under the supervision and vigilance of an expert like you, indubitably, would have been my most rewarding years of learning. I have planned to re-apply for

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as early as possible. I will keep you posted If in case any verification is required from your end. I couldn’t thank you more for the

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amazing lecture and the best tutoring I ever had. It has made me rethink, to carry forward my work, in training students to achieve their best. Thank you once again for

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unforgettable experience. I wish you always continue

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endeavour of yours to hone the skills of many students like me and help them find their feet in their respective fields. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you

sarnya_1987

Jan 3, 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

272 words

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