Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

The world has turned into a dangerous place for
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species of creatures and due to a number of
reasons
they encounter risks which cause
extinction
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of their
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. The
reasons
why they come across
danger
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the danger
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of
dissappearing
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disappearing
depend on different situations.
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this
essay will be explained
two
main
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about their
extinctios
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extinction
extinctions
and
two
possible
solutions
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mentioned problem.
To begin
with, global warming has been the most crucial effect on the beasts which face
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dissappear
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disappear
.
For example
, polar bears the beast has lived in
arctic
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area
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in
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many years,
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but unfortunetely
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unfortunetely
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unfortunately
can not find to sustain their life owing to melting
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glaciers
caused by increased
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. The
second
reason which
enable
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to die numerous
animals
is
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up of natural sources due to overusing. To illustrate, in today's world
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along with
the huge improvements in technological
fiels
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fields
, humankind has reached the opportunity of hunting by using
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dreadful
tools
such
as fishing
equipments
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which leads to
kill
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vast amounts of
fishes
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.
Therefore
, a number of challenges which
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been created by humanity like green gases and using
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dynamite
, cause
exctintions
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extinctions
extinction
of specific creatures.
On the other hand
, there might some
solutions
to prevent passing species
such
as diminishing the gas
emitions
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emissions
and creating territories where the
undangered
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endangered
animals
can live.
First
of all, by executing some restrictions
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factories which lead to air pollution and global
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warming
, might supply a maintainable nature for
beast
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the beast
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.
This
way not only does provide pure fields for
animals
, but
also
people can benefit from it.
Secondly
,
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particular
animals
which are almost extinct, may determine specific areas or parks.
Hence
, to resolve these difficulties
two
solutions
cited above can apply. To conclude, there are
two
main
reasons
and
also
two
essential
solutions
to rescue
the a
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number of living beings which have been faced with getting
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disappeared
. The
two
ways to save
animals
are finding
conveinent
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convenient
areas to live these beasts and banning emissions.
On the other hand
, the
reasons
cause
this
problem are exhausting the sources and global warming. It seems to me that
by
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resolving these issues can create an
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appropriate
territory to live
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more than we have lived.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • species extinction
  • endangered animals
  • biodiversity
  • habitat loss
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • poaching
  • illegal wildlife trade
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • conservation efforts
  • legislation
  • enforcement
  • human overpopulation
  • sustainable development
  • responsible consumption
  • education
  • awareness programs
  • protected areas
  • wildlife reserves
  • international cooperation
  • collaboration
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