Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

The world has turned into a dangerous place for

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species of creatures and due to a number of

reasons

they encounter risks which cause

extinction

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the extinction

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of their

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. The

reasons

why they come across

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the danger

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of

dissappearing

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disappearing

depend on different situations.

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essay will be explained

two

main

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about their

extinctios

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extinction

extinctions

and

two

possible

solutions

of

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mentioned problem.

To begin

with, global warming has been the most crucial effect on the beasts which face

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dissappear

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disappear

.

For example

, polar bears the beast has lived in

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area

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in

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many years,

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unfortunetely

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unfortunately

can not find to sustain their life owing to melting

glachiers

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glaciers

caused by increased

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. The

second

reason which

enable

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to die numerous

animals

is

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up of natural sources due to overusing. To illustrate, in today's world

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along with

the huge improvements in technological

fiels

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fields

, humankind has reached the opportunity of hunting by using

deadful

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dreadful

tools

such

as fishing

equipments

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which leads to

kill

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vast amounts of

fishes

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.

Therefore

, a number of challenges which

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been created by humanity like green gases and using

dinamite

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dynamite

, cause

exctintions

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extinctions

extinction

of specific creatures.

On the other hand

, there might some

solutions

to prevent passing species

such

as diminishing the gas

emitions

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emissions

and creating territories where the

undangered

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endangered

animals

can live.

First

of all, by executing some restrictions

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factories which lead to air pollution and global

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warming

, might supply a maintainable nature for

beast

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the beast

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.

This

way not only does provide pure fields for

animals

, but

also

people can benefit from it.

Secondly

,

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particular

animals

which are almost extinct, may determine specific areas or parks.

Hence

, to resolve these difficulties

two

solutions

cited above can apply. To conclude, there are

two

main

reasons

and

also

two

essential

solutions

to rescue

the a

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number of living beings which have been faced with getting

dissappeared

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disappeared

. The

two

ways to save

animals

are finding

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convenient

areas to live these beasts and banning emissions.

On the other hand

, the

reasons

cause

this

problem are exhausting the sources and global warming. It seems to me that

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resolving these issues can create an

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appropriate

territory to live

much

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more than we have lived.