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Some people buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having large number of toys ?

#people #children #toys
It is true that some individuals purchase their sons and daughters
a
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hundreds
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hundred
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toys
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 to play with , and though
this
 essay is mostly beneficial, there are
also
 some negative aspects that will
also
 be considered. One of the
first
 benefits of
such
 a measure is that if
people
 buy a lot of cars , dolls and other
toys
 ,
children
's thinking will improve.
As a result
,
children
's interest in the world increases.
This
 would mean that
children
 create their fantastic universe .
For example
, if you gift models of heroes to your
children
, little ones will be
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a hero
the hero
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hero
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heroes
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 in their world. Another advantage would be that
children
 will be
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a collector
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collector
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collectors
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 who
colect
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collect
 a lot of interesting
toys
 . It is often the case that if
children
 have two of the same toy , they can exchange
with
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 their friends for another toy. Which
increase
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 the business ability of
children
.
Then
 , if
children
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the children
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 are elder, they will be businessmen.
Nevertheless
, there are disadvantages to
such
 a solution.
First
 and foremost, when
people
 buy a lot of
toys
to
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children
, they will get used to it .
That is
, even when
children
 grow up, they will play with
toys
 .
As a
result
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 they do not want to break up from their
toys
 .
In addition
, buying too many
toys
 hurt
people
's family finances .
As a result
, families become poorer . Beyond that
children
used
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are used
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 to receiving gifts from their parents every day. Parents may not always have enough money to
shopping
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shop
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. In conclusion, it has enough benefits and drawbacks which some
people
 buy lots of
toys
to
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for
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 their
children
.
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