Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine. How can this issue be tackled?
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First
of all, many animals
are being hunted by poachers because of huge
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, the main reason behind this
phenomenon is human
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of the various species around the globe is going to be Correct your spelling
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Secondly
, it is an irrefutable fact that some animals
are merely hunted because of decorative purpose
, and medical treatments as well. In Fix the agreement mistake
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For instance
, a recent article revealed that 70 Per cent of beasts have alomst
entered into endangered list due to poaching.
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On the other hand
, it is a resposibility
to save Correct your spelling
responsibility
animals
for not only individuals but enforcement agencies also
. In addition
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the government
annouce
some Correct your spelling
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confined
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a regualar
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For instance
, developed nations have developed restricted areas for these creatures, and a team of doctors are
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animals
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To sum up, both government and individuals need to support the campaigns against the
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