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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter - Explain what happened to your watch - Describe your watch - Ask the manager to help you find it

#hotel #week #home #manager
Dear sir or madam,       I am your hotelʼs customer and I went to your place with my family
last
 week. I was so glad to your service. And your hotelʼs workers kindly for each client.     But now I am writing
this
 request because I went to your hotel with my family and for my necessary affairs one week ago .Afterwards, my family and I came back to our house .
Then
 I started looking for my watch and I could not find it in our house . Suddenly I realized that I had untied it on your hotel table . The colour of the watch is gold and the numbers of the time are written in Roman numerals. I think it is in the box . What I want to suggest is returning
it
Add the preposition
toit
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 me .I will so happy if you bring it to me in the
first
 few weeks. I think it is not a tough thing for your hotel service. Thank you for your attention.        Yours faithfully           ..........        Hamrayeva Munisa
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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