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Does modren technology make life more convenient or life was better when technology was simple

#modren #technology #life
No doubt
technology
 has created change in every sector of society. It made lifestyle more comfortable. Some consider that it was good when
technology
 was not so advanced. I believe new technological inventions have positive effects on us To negative ones. To support my views I'll discuss them In the following paragraphs. To commence with, it is irrefutable that machines have made our living
more
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easier, as
it
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they
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 reduced distances with good transportation, communication become so fast across the world. Entry of
internet
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 made people more independent,
for example
, we can get information about anything within seconds online. Apart from it, new gadgets are easy to carry and store more valuable data which is beneficial for business purposes. Nowadays no need to be bound to one place for work. We can complete our corporate tasks at any place without carrying more things.
For instance
,
new
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 apps like
zomoeo
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zoomed
 we may attend meeting at any place anytime on
laptop
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the laptop
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. Adding to
this
, education become so easy and interesting,
practicality
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 increased in all
subject
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subjects
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 of schooling, as anything can be explained to students by showing videos or slides on projectors. Students feel more lively in smart classes.
Furthermore
, there are a
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entertainment
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 sources which are only brought about by new Sciences. We can feel the character and situations of the moves
by
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 3D or 7D animation. It is
also
 anticipated that In future, we would be able
see
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 the live person in 3dimension while making
online
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the online
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call
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. Machines made
heavy
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the heavy
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task
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tasks
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 so easier for us from chopping In the
kichen
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kitchen
 to
develop
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product
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 without
need
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of
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 many workers or even one person. Robots are big creation of science
till
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the
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this
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 day
,
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 and expected
this
 trend will continue in the future and will make life more safe and
luxurious
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more luxurious
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. To sum up, as I discussed in
above
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the above
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 paragraph,
technology
 has
give
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 benefits in all
section
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 of the world and definitely In
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 days will do the same. Everything has
it
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 pros and cons, but I
thinks
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merits
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the merits
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 of
technology
 definitely outweigh the demerits.
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