some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society . discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed that robotic machinery is a vital part of technological development many areas yet these are not suitable for all occasions.
while
others think that it can have destructive effects on society. I strongly agree with the idea that this
machine is one
of the finest advances which is created in this
era due to
its brilliant accuracy and high-fi
speed.
On Correct your spelling
high
one
hand, one
portion of the population believes that robots will be a burden to our nation as the rates of unemployment will increase. Although
people would be benefitted
it would level up the laziness, exhaustion and fatigue among individuals Wrong verb form
benefit
Moreover
, this
invention lacks any emotional support, it does only what it has given a command to do. Lastly
, its production is way too expensive along with
its maintenance also
costs huge sums of money. For instance
, a study in the UK suggests that he
total cost from its material to creation would cost around 2 million dollars which covers almost half of the budget.
Correct your spelling
the
While
on one
hand there are many disadvantages of a robotic machine, Correct article usage
the one
on the contrary
, this
is equipped with wonderful features. This
automated machine performs tasks in an efficient and productive manner as compared to humans. In addition
to this
, it can perform tasks in an unsafe environment where potential risks to human life are seen. For instance
, during a fire outbreak in a company robots helped to evacuate people and were transferred to a safer place.
In conclusion, I believe that current robotic technology can perform multiple tasks at the same time even it
doesn’t even need a break. It has taken Correct word choice
if it
place
of humansCorrect article usage
the place
Change preposition
in
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