One of the consequences of improved technology is that many jobs that used to be done by people can now be completed by robots or computers. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The rapid advance of technology now allows

computers

and

robots

to perform tasks that

previously

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carried out by people and

consequently

, generates inevitable threats to those professions. People are divided in opinion about whether the advantages of

this

phenomenon exceed the disadvantages.

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essay will show that the positive impacts do not surpass the setbacks

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a couple of reasons. The

first

reason to highlight is that

robots

and

computers

cannot deliberately adapt to unparalleled situations

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in most jobs.

Although

robots

and

computers

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excellent

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and efficient job, they can do it because they have a series of steps that

previously

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planted

to

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their

system

. When the

system

cannot recognise a new situation or new problem, the

system

cannot perform the job since the steps to handle the situation did not set before. The

second

argument to notice is that

computers

and

robots

enormously rely on electricity. The mass use of

computers

and

robots

will be likely to give a large amount of burden

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electrical

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system

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. Sometimes, it cannot

fulfill

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the need

of

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power, and

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triggers

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technical

problem

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or even worse, a blackout. To illustrate, if

this

happens, it will stop the work of

robots

and

computers

.

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, a lot of services

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to be stopped, and the

system

will be paralysed. In conclusion, the advantages of

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the use of

robots

and

computers

to replace

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cannot surpass the disadvantages.

Robots

and

computers

are only able to perform tasks that

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been set before, and they rely entirely on

electrical

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the electrical

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system

which

they

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will stop working if there is

problem

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a problem

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with the electrical

system

.