More and more couples are deciding to be "child-free", to have no children, in other words. Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons. While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives, such as concern about overpopulation and desire for independence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The decision of a

couple

to either have a

kid

or not has

been

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widely stirred up

a

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controversy in several countries. Both sides of

views

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will be discussed in

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essay including my opinions. Some people agree to

married

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without kids mainly due to financial-related

issue

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.

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a child,

it

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cost huge financial investments as all

parents

aim to

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only the best thing to their loves.

Furthermore

, a perception among

parents

of raising a

kid

to grow up smart reflects how good the

parents

are,

has

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been bombarded in several countries

especially

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in Asia

such

as Korea, China and Thailand.

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,

parents

are willing to pay extra

to

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a premium detergent brand that specifically

offer

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to wash the

white-colored

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student uniform as if it is newly bought at all times because the whiter the uniform

are

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, the higher self-esteem of being the good mom she gains. In consequence, to be

a good

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a good parent

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parents

, there is a big financial issue that

couple

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should plan ahead.

However

, there is an opposite argument that married

couple

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couples

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should have a

kid

to

fulfill

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the future workforce of the country. Right now, there are many countries facing the

aging

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society issue as the numbers of elder outgrowth

new

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generation population.

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phenomenon will widely affect

the

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industries as there is no young generation to replace those who reaching retire stage. As so, the workforce market cannot produce the outcome as high as it should

be

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while

need

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to provide

fund

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to support

this

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elderly groups

for

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their living. In conclusion, though married without

kid

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is a personal decision agreed

between

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a

couple

due to financial investment

requirement

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, the government should somehow subsidize on

this

otherwise

they will lack

of

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the

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elder replacing workforce in the future.