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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

#immigration #impact #society #consequences
Immigration
 has
an
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 impact
several
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countries
 for years, especially
immigrating
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 from developing
countries
 to developed ones. Various reasons are behind the action which will
further
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this
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In addition
, the consequence of it will
also
 be addressed. One of the main reasons
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immigration
 is to strive for
better
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opportunity
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 in life. Not just only the career opportunity, but
also
 chances to live in
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 better environment which cannot be found in
third
-world
countries
. Unlike
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developing
countries
 that provide limited access
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 quality public transportation,
the
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developed
countries
 pay high attention to
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 that their public commute can be well-accessed by everyone in the cities, both route availabilities and affordable fee. Another reason is to earn more money. The developed
countries
 offer higher wage
rate
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rates
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 than the developing ones with similar job descriptions. For
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, in
Thailand
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 the daily minimum wage rate is
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USD10 daily
comparing
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 to some Middle East
countries
 that offer
minimum
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 rate
at
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 USD20.
However
,
immigration
 could lead to some negative results. It is
obviously
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 that
immigration
 will cause
the
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 high population density in the designated
countries
 or cities. Local
government
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governments
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 need to ensure that they can maintain the standard of living for existing local people with all public facilities.
In
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consequences
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,
local
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government
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governments
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 need to supply more facilities to meet
with
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the increasing demand from immigrating
expat
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.
Furthermore
, crime or illegal issues are
also
 another concern that should be aware
.
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 We have seen a lot in
news
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the news
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 that teenagers are scammed and immigrated to developed
countries
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dreaming
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 of having a better future but end up
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working all day and night in the factory
instead
. To conclude,
immigration
 has become one of the social impacts globally. It comes with the benefit
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 immigrating people while giving negative results to existing locals and
government
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 to handle the higher density population.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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