Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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To express our ideas and to communicate with others we need a
language
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. English is considered
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the universal
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and is used in most
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the
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countries around the globe. But there are several nations
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do not prefer to
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English,
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as China and Japan. If one travels to these countries, there will be many difficulties one has to face
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. The main problem that will arise when there is a
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barrier is
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the difficulty in using public services. Signs and notices, purchasing tickets, selecting public transport and when to get on and get down a bus, all these simple tasks will be an issue. And since it's difficult to communicate with
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, colleagues,
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and co-workers
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,we will be socially isolated.
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, kids who are schooling will find it hard to follow their lessons.
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, there are many solutions to overcome the
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barriers
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. In most
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the
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countries, It is common to have
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ticket counters with options to select multiple languages. And
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of Google
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on your mobile phone will be a
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when facing difficulty in communication with foreigners.
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, most of the
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banks etcetera have their own translators who will help with people with different
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backgrounds. So, to sum up, I agree that
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in a place that
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a foreign
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can cause many social and practical problems.
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, in the modern world, there are many solutions that you can
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to make these problems easier.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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