Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• In our modern life, online

education

has been developing almost every day and it is becoming extremely well-known. Few individuals mention that

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has

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of significant profits

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will

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replace

offline

education

soon. Others point out that traditional

education

is irreplaceable. I strongly believe that

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traditional teaching is extremely beneficial for

students

• On the one hand, the majority of humans say that

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there are a lot of beneficial aspects of

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education

, and it is worthwhile for

students

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because if

students

study at school, they are able to ask something which they do not understand,

also

students

can say about their problems on their

education

to their

teachers

without any difficulties, and their

teachers

try to solve their problems.

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, nowadays I am preparing

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exam and I study

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.

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I am able to say my problems to my tutor.

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as I can not speak English,

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I told him about it, and He gives me some advice and solve my problem. •

On the other hand

, other people say that

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there are a lot of profits of

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because if

students

learn something through the internet, they are able to save time and they can take

education

every moment which they want. They do not spend their time

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to college or courses.

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they can take

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from foreign

teachers

without challenges.

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example

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my best friend is learning

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language from native English

teachers

through the internet. It is one of the best

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to take high-quality

education

. • In conclusion, nowadays many

students

prefer studying

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the

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online courses

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it is extremely worthwhile for them.

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others say that

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students

should be taken

education

at school. I think

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offline

education

is very important for

students

.