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Online education is becoming more Nad more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that will replace face-to-face education soon. Others soy that traditional is irreplaceable Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Internet learning is getting one of the preferable
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 of obtaining information. Many people think that
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 studying on the internet is the best way to be educated while other people believe that , online teaching is better. From my point of view, online learning is more significant rather than online education. Nowadays, we are living where is technology more developed, so it creates the perfect conditions for learning too. Internet learning become a popular and beneficial
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 of learning system, especially often the disease which name’s Covid-19. Most countries
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 began to use
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 way to create for
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 comfort on e-learning. On one side, online lessons are available almost every time which creates for
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 a had governments opportunities to improve their knowledge.
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, the science of the university RTU in Latvia said that
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incorrect studying is getting one of the most
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 of educational materials, so we should improve it and create it for our
students
' beneficial opportunities.
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, a number of individuals think that
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 learning on social media is not beneficial enough, because there would be some
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 of difficulties during online studies misunderstanding. To conclude, traditional learning is admitted by everyone, as beneficial for
students
 and no
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 of studying way is not able to replace it.
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