Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claimed that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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the help of the internet getting common, and a few individuals believe that

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has too many advantages which can take the place of our traditional way of learning in the near future, while others said that giving knowledge in

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situation

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can be much better. In my opinion, online education is far more advantageous for students’ learning, because of

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of it.   For most, learning knowledge

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face-to-face is

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good because of its some comforts

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in which

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students can learn anything under

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control and with the pressure of

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the teacher

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.

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more beneficial for undergrads who have

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bad behaviour,

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people

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the people

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parents

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strict

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their sons and

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those to real extra clubs to learn something new.

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of pupils

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under the hand of

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because of their higher quality and strict rule of teaching.  

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, there are many people who

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about online teaching is the greatest way for pupils. For

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reason, online learning can bring

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lot

benefits

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of benefits

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like cheaper payments,

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time and it makes

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convenience for learners.

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, numerous children

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by distance-learning all over the world for

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kind of reasons. A good example is that online education has changed

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my little

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preferable choice after he completed

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online English course.    To conclude,

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there are some benefits of learning by instructors with the method of face-to-face and under strict control,

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it has an extremely positive impact

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undergrads if they study online.