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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entreteinment. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, the significance of
books
 has been questioned and underestimated, some
people
 are starting to use alternative information
sources
. In my opinion, I agree that perhaps there are some other
sources
 better than
books
,
however
, we should not forget the value of
books
 over time.
First
 of all, in the
last
 century,
technology
 has become one of the most valuable functions and a major role in our lives, in fact, some
people
 started to rely on it and use it almost every day.
This
technology
 obsession makes
people
 prefer online
sources
 rather than
books
 because they find it easier and fit their requirements. In fact, most of the information's on the internet is not even true, you can not rely on it or trust it.
Nevertheless
, some
people
 find
technology
 much more entertaining than
books
,
however
, I respectfully disagree. Despite all the merits of internet resources, the pleasure of going to the
books
 store and picking up the book you are interested in is unprecedented,
thus
, constantly reading
books
 will improve your language and fluency as well. we often hear that the
people
 who read
books
 are the smartest, which I do not really believe. A lot of
people
 read
books
 for pleasure and entertainment,
for example
, novels. Even if the content creator made a movie or series inverted to the novel, reading it is so much better,
for example
, in Harry Potter novels, some
people
 admit that the novel was ten times better than the actual series. In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe in the power of
technology
 or recent information
sources
,
nonetheless
, I admire
books
 and I confirm that they are one of my favourite entertaining methods.
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