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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entreteinment. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, the significance of
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 has been questioned and underestimated, some
people
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 are starting to use alternative information
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. In my opinion, I agree that perhaps there are some other
sources
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 better than
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,
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, we should not forget the value of
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 over time.
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 of all, in the
last
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 century,
technology
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 has become one of the most valuable functions and a major role in our lives, in fact, some
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 started to rely on it and use it almost every day.
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technology
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 obsession makes
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 prefer online
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 rather than
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 because they find it easier and fit their requirements. In fact, most of the information's on the internet is not even true, you can not rely on it or trust it.
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, some
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 find
technology
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 much more entertaining than
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,
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, I respectfully disagree. Despite all the merits of internet resources, the pleasure of going to the
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 store and picking up the book you are interested in is unprecedented,
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, constantly reading
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 will improve your language and fluency as well. we often hear that the
people
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 who read
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 are the smartest, which I do not really believe. A lot of
people
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 read
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 for pleasure and entertainment,
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, novels. Even if the content creator made a movie or series inverted to the novel, reading it is so much better,
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, in Harry Potter novels, some
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 admit that the novel was ten times better than the actual series. In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe in the power of
technology
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 or recent information
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,
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, I admire
books
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 and I confirm that they are one of my favourite entertaining methods.

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