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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #news #internet #newspapers #source
Despite the huge improvements in the field of technology
in addition
 to the popularity of
the
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social
media
 among the current generator, we can notice that
newspapers
 are still the main
source
 of
news
. It is worth mentioning that the vast majority of newspaper reads are from old
people
 that consider conservative and prefer physical things rather than new
media
 and software applications. When it comes to prices, we can find that the daily price for
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newspaper newspaper
newspapers newspaper
 is more affordable than a monthly subscription to the
internet
 service.
Furthermore
, the old and great reputation of the
newspapers
 converted them into a trustable
source
 of
news
 nowadays.
On the other hand
. Many
people
 believe that it is only a matter of time before the complete extinction of the newspaper as the new young generation does not prefer
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any physical
source
 of
news
in addition
 to the complete usage of social
media
 and the
internet
. Another persuasive argument is that
,
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 the instant and immediate service of the
internet
 is the main driving factor for its popularity as many
people
 prefer to use the fast and immediate
source
 of
news
 rather than using the newspaper which normally printed in a delay time due to the printing and distribution processes. To sum up, I believe that both
newspapers
 and the
internet
 are equally important as main sources of
news
 and information. As we cannot force
people
 to use
newspapers
 as a unique
source
 of
news
 and at the same time we can not hamper the process of the
internet
 and social
media
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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