Organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solution can you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The main purpose of family

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event

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events

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and

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celebration

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celebrations

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is to bring happiness

for

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to

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family

member

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members

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and bring

all

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them all

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together

specially

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todays

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today

people

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are getting even

more busy

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and rarely find a chance to meet each other.

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of

celebration

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used to be simple and friendly

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people

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seems

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to forget why they gather around and the

progress

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process

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for

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of

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setting up a

celebration

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got complicated. In the essay below, I’ll talk about some of these problems, reasons and solutions

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my knowledge.

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with, the most common problem

people

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might face in the

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for

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of

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setting up a

celebration

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,

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as weddings or even birthdays could be their budget. Of

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the price of renting a place, dress, food and other

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which it's necessary are high but it seems

people

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are trying to compare themselves

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others, so they try to celebrate their

event

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in the most

luxury

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way

the

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they

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can. But most of their guests

wont

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be

in

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event

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the event

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on

time

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or even remember the

event

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for

long

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. The price would be even higher because of

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time

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the time

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and date of the

celebration

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. For, example in my

countrys

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country

country's

people

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are really interested in celebrating their wedding

in

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on

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special days like aid or some specific holidays so related companies would put higher prices

for

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those days for sure.

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my view,

half

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of the

reasons

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for

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problem is up to

people

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. for, example not to compare themselves with others or try to celebrate more simply

how

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apply

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ever

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the prices and more

stuffs

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are inevitable and

its

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out of our

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to control the prices , but it can

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to

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apply

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people

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how to celebrate

simple

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or avoid unnecessary costs by media . Another problem

people

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might face during the

celebration

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or progress of

setting

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the setting

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is stress or an argument between the hosts. Setting up a large

celebration

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needs enormous

things

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such

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as

time

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, money,

things

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needed to

be prepare

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like food, place, drink, dress, inviting guests, music and other

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. It's usually normal to forget about some of them or not

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enough

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for all of them and it may cause

argument

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or stress for hosts.

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the solution is simple,

people

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can set up a plan or even make themselves a list of

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and do it in order or split it between themselves.

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, in my

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half

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of the reasons for every

problems

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during the

celebration

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are inevitable

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the other

half

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is up to us and how we manage the

event

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also

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half

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can help a lot

reducing

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the problems.

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addition

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I hope

people

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remember how we used to celebrate in

past

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the past

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whitoutbeing

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whiteout being

fancy but friendly