Organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solution can you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
The main purpose of family
event
and Fix the agreement mistake
events
celebration
is to bring happiness Fix the agreement mistake
celebrations
for
family Change preposition
to
member
and bring Fix the agreement mistake
members
all
together Correct pronoun usage
them all
specially
Replace the word
especially
todays
Correct your spelling
today
people
are getting even more busy
and rarely find a chance to meet each other. Replace the words
busier
These kind
of Change the determiner
This kind
These kinds
celebration
used to be simple and friendly however
people
seems
to forget why they gather around and the Change the verb form
seem
progress
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process
for
setting up a Change preposition
of
celebration
got complicated. In the essay below, I’ll talk about some of these problems, reasons and solutions according to
my knowledge. To begin
with, the most common problem people
might face in the progress
Correct your spelling
process
for
setting up a Change preposition
of
celebration
, such
as weddings or even birthdays could be their budget. Of course
the price of renting a place, dress, food and other Add a comma
course,
things
which it's necessary are high but it seems people
are trying to compare themselves whit
others, so they try to celebrate their Correct your spelling
with
event
in the most luxury
way Replace the word
luxurious
the
can. But most of their guests Correct your spelling
they
wont
be Add an apostrophe
won't
in
Change preposition
at
event
on Correct article usage
the event
time
or even remember the event
for long
. The price would be even higher because of Correct article usage
a long
time
and date of the Correct article usage
the time
celebration
. For, example in my countrys
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country
country's
people
are really interested in celebrating their wedding in
special days like aid or some specific holidays so related companies would put higher prices Change preposition
on
for
those days for sure. Change preposition
on
From
my view, Change preposition
In
half
of the reasons
for Fix the agreement mistake
reason
this
problem is up to people
. for, example not to compare themselves with others or try to celebrate more simply how
Rephrase
apply
ever
the prices and more Rephrase
However
stuffs
are inevitable and Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
its
out of our Replace the word
it's
it is
hand
to control the prices , but it can Fix the agreement mistake
hands
be reminded
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remind
to
Change preposition
apply
people
how to celebrate simple
or avoid unnecessary costs by media . Another problem Change the word
simply
people
might face during the celebration
or progress of setting
is stress or an argument between the hosts. Setting up a large Correct article usage
the setting
celebration
needs enormous things
such
as time
, money, things
needed to be prepare
like food, place, drink, dress, inviting guests, music and other Change the verb form
be prepared
things
. It's usually normal to forget about some of them or not having
enough Wrong verb form
have
time
for all of them and it may cause argument
or stress for hosts. Fix the agreement mistake
arguments
How ever
the solution is simple, Correct your spelling
However
people
can set up a plan or even make themselves a list of things
and do it in order or split it between themselves. To conclude
, in my opinion
Add the comma(s)
opinion,
half
of the reasons for every problems
during the Change to a singular noun
problem
celebration
are inevitable however
the other half
is up to us and how we manage the event
also
I think this
half
can help a lot reducing
the problems. Change preposition
in reducing
In
addition
I hope Add a comma
addition,
people
remember how we used to celebrate in past
Correct article usage
the past
whitoutbeing
fancy but friendlyCorrect your spelling
whiteout being
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