Organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solution can you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The main purpose of family
event
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events
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and
celebration
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celebrations
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is to bring happiness
for
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to
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family
member
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members
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and bring
all
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them all
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together
specially
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todays
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today
people
are getting even
more busy
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and rarely find a chance to meet each other.
These kind
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of
celebration
used to be simple and friendly
however
people
seems
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to forget why they gather around and the
progress
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process
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for
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of
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setting up a
celebration
got complicated. In the essay below, I’ll talk about some of these problems, reasons and solutions
according to
my knowledge.
To begin
with, the most common problem
people
might face in the
progress
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process
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for
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of
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setting up a
celebration
,
such
as weddings or even birthdays could be their budget. Of
course
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the price of renting a place, dress, food and other
things
which it's necessary are high but it seems
people
are trying to compare themselves
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others, so they try to celebrate their
event
in the most
luxury
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way
the
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they
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can. But most of their guests
wont
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won't
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be
in
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at
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event
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the event
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on
time
or even remember the
event
for
long
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a long
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. The price would be even higher because of
time
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the time
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and date of the
celebration
. For, example in my
countrys
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country
country's
people
are really interested in celebrating their wedding
in
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on
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special days like aid or some specific holidays so related companies would put higher prices
for
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those days for sure.
From
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my view,
half
of the
reasons
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reason
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for
this
problem is up to
people
. for, example not to compare themselves with others or try to celebrate more simply
how
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ever
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the prices and more
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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are inevitable and
its
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out of our
hand
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to control the prices , but it can
be reminded
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to
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people
how to celebrate
simple
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or avoid unnecessary costs by media . Another problem
people
might face during the
celebration
or progress of
setting
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the setting
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is stress or an argument between the hosts. Setting up a large
celebration
needs enormous
things
such
as
time
, money,
things
needed to
be prepare
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like food, place, drink, dress, inviting guests, music and other
things
. It's usually normal to forget about some of them or not
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enough
time
for all of them and it may cause
argument
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arguments
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or stress for hosts.
How ever
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the solution is simple,
people
can set up a plan or even make themselves a list of
things
and do it in order or split it between themselves.
To conclude
, in my
opinion
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half
of the reasons for every
problems
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problem
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during the
celebration
are inevitable
however
the other
half
is up to us and how we manage the
event
also
I think
this
half
can help a lot
reducing
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in reducing
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the problems.
In
addition
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I hope
people
remember how we used to celebrate in
past
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the past
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whitoutbeing
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whiteout being
fancy but friendly
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