Some people believe that climate affects the person’s way of life while others believe that climate has greater impact on the economy of a region. Discuss both view and give your opinion?

Global warming has increasingly become noticeable and
consequently
a topic of concern for both
individuals
and the government.
While
many argue that it has a more significant impact on countries' economies, others claim that greater suffering is felt individually.
This
essay is going to discuss both views and explain why I think
individuals
are the ones paying the highest costs in
this
situation. On the one hand, countries, states and cities feel the impact of
climate
in their finances. The sectors most affected are agriculture and tourism.
For instance
, the rise of the global temperature has caused draughts and changed the seasons.
This
leads to a scarcity of food to sell and a decrease in tourist visits during summer holidays.
Therefore
, many think that the collective economies are the most affected.
However
, the economy of a region should be diversified and have other sources of income to tap into.
On the other hand
, it has been more painful to citizens who are facing economic and health problems
as a consequence
of global warming. Many no longer can afford to do their groceries as they used to because of the increase in food prices on the shelves which is a result of produce scarcity generated by
climate
.
Not to mention
the rise of cases of diseases transmitted by mosquitos
such
as malaria and dengue.
As a result
, the more the temperature rises, the more
individuals
will suffer.
To sum up
, the
climate
is currently affecting our lives and it will dictate our future.
Although
local economies are affected by it, people feel the immediate impact on their wallets and health.
This
essay discussed the
climate
effect on both regions and
individuals
and presented reasons to justify the greater pain of
individuals
.
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