Many customs and traditional ways of behaviors are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?

With the rapidly progressing

world

,some

traditions

have become obsolete.Some still hold on to the old ways and

traditions

,while others do not.

Nonetheless

,I completely agree that many

traditions

today are not worth upholding

such

as owning

weapons

,underage marriages,and preventing

females

from getting their education.

Firstly

,having some

weapons

at home has been a tradition in many parts of the

world

,which is needed to let go.Previously,in order to protect oneself ,one had to have them at home for personal safety.But now, the

world

is a much safer place with highly trained police and sophisticated technology to protect its citizens.

In addition

to that,law and order situations may

also

deteriorate in the presence of

weapons

.To illustrate,the shooting at Christchurch mosque was a result of allowing citizens to own

weapons

.

Thus

,it is high time that we let

this

custom go.

Secondly

,underage marriage was

also

a thing of the past,

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needed to be laid off.Due to poor financial conditions,it would be difficult for a young couple to survive.

For instance

,financial instability has been reported to be one of the major causes of higher divorce rates in the USA.

Also

,at a younger age,a person may not be mature enough to know his good and bad.

Hence

,a person should

first

reach the age of 18 at least,as constitutionalized by most of the states to be able to be old enough to make a wiser decision.

Lastly

,not allowing

females

to get educated has been against the

traditions

in many parts of the

world

, and

such

customs should be abrogated.Education is a fundamental right of every human being,whether male or female.

In addition

to that,

females

make up more than half of the

world

's population,so it would be unwise to have half the number illiterate.

For instance

,Japan has progressed economically because it has educated and utilized most of its human resources including both genders.

Therefore

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a mindset was not even right for the old times,and ,

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there is no point holding onto them today. To conclude,some ways of the old were not right all along,

such

as disallowing the education of

females

and some were for older times

such

as keeping firearms.

That is

why most of the old ways must be left behind.