Many customs and traditional ways of behaviors are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?

With the rapidly progressing

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,some

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have become obsolete.Some still hold on to the old ways and

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,while others do not.

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,I completely agree that many

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today are not worth upholding

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as owning

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,underage marriages,and preventing

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from getting their education.

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,having some

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at home has been a tradition in many parts of the

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,which is needed to let go.Previously,in order to protect oneself ,one had to have them at home for personal safety.But now, the

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is a much safer place with highly trained police and sophisticated technology to protect its citizens.

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to that,law and order situations may

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deteriorate in the presence of

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.To illustrate,the shooting at Christchurch mosque was a result of allowing citizens to own

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.

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,it is high time that we let

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custom go.

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,underage marriage was

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a thing of the past,

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needed to be laid off.Due to poor financial conditions,it would be difficult for a young couple to survive.

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,financial instability has been reported to be one of the major causes of higher divorce rates in the USA.

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,at a younger age,a person may not be mature enough to know his good and bad.

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,a person should

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reach the age of 18 at least,as constitutionalized by most of the states to be able to be old enough to make a wiser decision.

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,not allowing

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to get educated has been against the

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in many parts of the

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customs should be abrogated.Education is a fundamental right of every human being,whether male or female.

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to that,

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make up more than half of the

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's population,so it would be unwise to have half the number illiterate.

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,Japan has progressed economically because it has educated and utilized most of its human resources including both genders.

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a mindset was not even right for the old times,and ,

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there is no point holding onto them today. To conclude,some ways of the old were not right all along,

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as disallowing the education of

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and some were for older times

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as keeping firearms.

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why most of the old ways must be left behind.