Nowadays in many countries most shops and products are the same. Some people feel this is a positive development, while others disagree. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

In today's modern world, daily use things are launched in
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on regular basis. It is believed by, many folks that most of the nations have similar shops and items
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good while many
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, it has a negative impact on society. In
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essay, I will explain both sides and give my view. To commence with,
same
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brand around the globe, not only promote the global expansion of
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the company
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but
also
provide
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employement
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employment
to citizens. To explain, when an organisation expand around the globe it will help to
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relationship
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between two nations.
Moreover
, it will not only open new ways for trade
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but
also
contribute to the country's finance.
For example
, in 2009, Apple sign an agreement with India to establish their
first
business there and found it was a great victory for them as well as for the public.
Hence
, it is proven that the same industrial development is fruitful for everyone.
On the other hand
,
although
similar goods provide equality to the population across
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borders, but still have some drawbacks
such
as differences in
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prices. To explicate, people face the problems of huge rate shift for the exact stuff. Due to changes in
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their
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is a huge shift
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the prices for goods because of several factors
such
as
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a tax
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on importing the things.
For instance
, in a
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it is found that people ask their friends or relatives to buy products from another place at
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amount.
As a result
, people avoid
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buying items from
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the local
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market
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markets
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and get the same at
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a low
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rate
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rates
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from other nations, which results in
loosing
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economy
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the economy
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. In conclusion, despite the demerits of the aforementioned statement, in my opinion, it is hard to ignore the merits and positive impact of having
same
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shops and products.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • homogenization
  • globalization
  • identical
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • enhanced competition
  • lower prices
  • cultural diversity
  • limited choices
  • individuality
  • balanced approach
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