The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter tothe library’s manager. In your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to apply for the job at the school
library
during this
summer vacation.
My name is John, and I am a sophomore in this
school. I am an ardent, easy-going, and extrovert
person. And I excel in classifying items, especially books and magazines. Not only Replace the word
extroverted
this
, I have three years of part-time job experience
at the library
and one year experience
of working in a convenience store. What's more, I heard that the small room of the library
will hold a simple but delicacy painting exhibition. Also
, I have experience
hosting similar activities, and I believe that I will sacrifice myself to finish this
challenging task.
It will provide me with a well-rounded experience
and will build up my confidence to adapt to many kinds of work environments. Also
, it would be great if I could work in the school library
this
summer, and it would improve my financial situation.
I appreciate your time and consideration of my application.
Yours Sincerely,
John ChangSubmitted by aa0963178783 on
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task achievement
Ensure your introduction precisely sets the stage for the purpose of the letter. Consider providing directly relevant information regarding your education that relates to library work.
task achievement
Maintain a more formal register consistently throughout the letter and avoid overly-friendly expressions that may not be suitable for a job application.
coherence and cohesion
Offer a clear sequence of ideas and avoid mixing multiple ideas in a single paragraph. Consider using connectors and transition words to guide the reader through your argument more smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
Use a consistent and appropriate closing salutation for formal letters.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite