Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. OtheS believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. EXAMPI Discuss both these views and give your . What Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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These
two
schools of thoughts regarding Add a missing verb
are two
place
of work for Add an article
the place
especialy
trained people Correct your spelling
especially
such
as doctors and engineers. On one hand, they should serve the Linking Words
mother land
as they trained using their resources and they should Correct your spelling
motherland
Use synonyms
service
Replace the word
serve
to
the nation. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
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especialized
people seek better Correct your spelling
specialized
specialised
payment
, and better life options with Replace the word
pay
regards
to the living Fix the agreement mistake
regard
satandards
and Correct your spelling
standards
children
Change noun form
children's
education
in foreign countries. In my opinion, as professionals dedicate their lives to Use synonyms
achieve
Wrong verb form
achieving
the
high position by working hard, they should be allowed to live and give Correct article usage
apply
service
Use synonyms
in
anywhere in the world as they like.
As specialists in medical and engineering fields, get trained using resources and Change preposition
apply
fascititeis
of the Correct your spelling
facilities
fasciitis
country
of training, it is only fair to expect their Use synonyms
service
Use synonyms
being
extended to the same Change the verb form
to be
country
. Doctors trim themselves by studying and treating fellow Use synonyms
Use synonyms
country men
while apprentice engineers work on local projects during their training. Correct your spelling
countrymen
For example
, Linking Words
Medical
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a Medical
school
in Colombo, Sri Lanka Fix the agreement mistake
schools
provide
clinical training for medical students at Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
Bational
Hospital of Sri Lanka, free of charge. Correct your spelling
National
Therefore
, newly passed out medical graduates are bound to provide Linking Words
mandatory
Add an article
a mandatory
period
of Fix the agreement mistake
periods
service
Use synonyms
at
Change preposition
in
national
health sector. It is fair Add an article
the national
by
the citizens to receive Change preposition
for
such
services as Linking Words
pay back
for Correct your spelling
payback
being
free study materials during their training.
Unnecessary verb
apply
On the contrary
, scholars struggle to achieve higher Linking Words
education
in Use synonyms
medical
and engineering sectors compared to gaining other professional qualifications. They struggle during Correct article usage
the medical
extended
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an extended
the extended
period
of training and apprenticeship before Fix the agreement mistake
periods
become
stable in life. Change the verb form
becoming
Hence
, seeking Linking Words
for
better job opportunities with good salaries, better Change preposition
apply
education
and living Use synonyms
standard
for children is justified. Fix the agreement mistake
standards
Recent
press release from Correct article usage
A recent
Add an article
the ministry
ministry
of Health, Sri Lanka Change the capitalization
Ministry
started
Correct your spelling
stated
thatciver
three thousand medical officers applied for foreign leave Correct your spelling
that cover
last
year, which is nearly 15% of the category employed by the national health sector for the same year. A Linking Words
servay
Correct your spelling
service
done
on Add the auxiliary verb
did
has done
country
leavers, either they permanently Use synonyms
migrating
for children’s Wrong verb form
migrate
education
or temporarily Use synonyms
seeking
jobs.
In conclusion, despite the belief that professionals should be employed by the Wrong verb form
seek
country
they qualifiedUse synonyms
,
so that they can pay off the nation, they should be allowed to migrate Remove the comma
apply
to
anywhere in the world in order to be employed in we'll payed jobs, live Change preposition
apply
Add an article
a high
high quality
life and get Add a hyphen
high-quality
good
Add an article
a good
education
for their children. I strongly believe that deserve to live freely in any Use synonyms
country
they wish,Use synonyms
as
after dedicating themselves to the field they are specialized in.Change preposition
apply
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