In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Which do you think is better in terms of quality: free public healthcare and education or privately paid health care and education?
A number of countries
does
not spend Change the verb form
do
on
money for medical enmities and educational activities Change preposition
apply
such
as building school or funding costs
of students fully, due to the fact that Correct article usage
the costs
government
has expected Correct article usage
the government
from
Change preposition
apply
it's
citizens to pay all of these Replace the word
its
expences
. Correct your spelling
expenses
Although
it has been argued by some people
that this
behavior
enables better services in terms of quality, I definitely disagree with their opinions because I believe that states should provide health care and education costs Change the spelling
behaviour
of
Change preposition
for
community
by ensuring qualified staff and Add an article
the community
places
.
To begin
with, one one
can deny that the governments have to take care of all needs of Remove the redundancy
apply
it's
Replace the word
its
people
who have lived that
country, which involve medical and educational demands. Change preposition
in that
For example
, citizens have deserved to live the
best conditions as much as possible, which comprise all of the Change preposition
in the
communtiy
, Correct your spelling
community
should
be looked after by their rulers. In fact, Correct word choice
and should
this
opportunity must be essential
human right and if an ordinary person pays his taxes, can estimate various services from Add an article
an essential
state
with the best Add an article
a state
the state
equipments
. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Therefore
, the government has to apply different public aplications
with Correct your spelling
applications
sofisticated
tools regardless cost of them.
Correct your spelling
sophisticated
On the other hand
, it has been known that private
sector has applied better conditions in terms of various aspects than public services Correct article usage
the private
such
as quality
of buildings and devices which have been used for treatment. To illustrate, if we consider an ordinary student who has gone to Correct article usage
the quality
state
Correct article usage
a state
collage
to study, he would encounter Correct your spelling
college
places
and tools which are built low
quality, Change preposition
of low
wheras
a private university provides different options. Correct your spelling
whereas
In other words
, people
who have taken Add an article
a class
class
from private Fix the agreement mistake
classes
college
not only come across Fix the agreement mistake
colleges
sofisticated
Correct your spelling
sophisticated
places
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
they have recieved
better Correct your spelling
received
aproaches
. Yet, leaving all these public sectors to businessmen might create different problems in terms of Correct your spelling
approaches
inequalty
.
To sum up, it is fact that private facilities supply better options to Correct your spelling
inequality
equality
people
than state enmities. However
, it is not mean that all places
should be rulled
by Correct your spelling
ruled
private
Correct article usage
a private
field
. It seems to me that governments should take care of their citizens by ensuring the best conditions.Fix the agreement mistake
fields
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