Some people think that individuals who make a lot of money are most successful. Other think that those who contribute to society like teachers and scientists are most successful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A lot of students trying to settle abroad after graduation for
work
and experience. There are those who believe that professionals must work
in the country
where they trained, however
, opponents which are supporting the idea about
living and working in different Change preposition
of
countries
based on individual’s
priorities. The latter idea makes sense in terms of economic conditions and living standards.
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individual
On the other hand
, being educated and working in the same country
ease to perform the responsibilities. For instance
, in Kazakhstan, students are getting familiar with professional lives in a university by doing an internship. In addition
, most countries
offer free education from school to university. In other words
, when professional people work
in their countries
they can easily be part of a society, without losing an
economical power.
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On the other hand
, students or professionals who settle abroad have better opportunities to grow in the future. Every professional or student must do their best to survive in other
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another country
other countries
country
, as
a result, they become successful and paid well. Correct word choice
and as
This
situation can improve self-development skills way faster than homeland. Indeed, such
conditions fit very well to younger
generation and promote them to move to developed Add an article
the younger
a younger
countries
.
In conclusion, there is a dilemma whether qualified people should work
in the country
they trained or
they can move to another Change preposition
in or
country
if they want. In my own opinion, people have the freedom to choose the place they live because of reasons
written above.Correct article usage
the reasons
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